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The Properties of Embers

It took me a while to understand love.
The kind that stays around and doesn't light new fires,
but shows you how to tend the embers that last.

The heat is still strong and gives a warmth you shouldn't ignore.
Embers when she still thinks you're funny after all these years.
Embers when forgiveness is given with just a look.
Embers when she says she wants to pass first,
because she doesn't want to know grief like that.

Embers are sometimes careless in this way.
Their heat can still burn you even without touch.

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Rumination on a mature and comfortable love.
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That is what I want, if only I didn't snuff them out. Great job!

The power of our language can and will change the world.
Successively until our languages become one!

Thank you for stopping by to coment Leslie - much appreciated!

Best

Michael Anthony

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Beautiful, Michael,
A sincere poem from a grateful heart and tender soul.
Thank you!
L

Spot on L! Thanks for commenting.

Best

Michael Anthony

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