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Where now?
Draw upon your memories,
Let them dance within your mind.
For you are the guardian of these treasures,
Your loved one has left behind
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Fri, 2023-08-18 12:10
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Geezer
Fri, 2023-08-18 12:02
The loved ones...
who have left me, have also left me as guardians of the treasured memories, ones that become all the more valuable, for when I am no longer here to remember them, they will pass away with me. I like this simple sort of rhyme that calls for the guarding of such memories. It makes for pleasant thoughts. ~ Geezer.
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WealdenCelebrant
Fri, 2023-08-18 18:22
Thank you
Thank you Geezer, I wrote that after my dad passed away - I was lucky that he spoke openly of his life, his likes (and dislikes!).
But he has left me with wonderful memories.
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